Stephen Forcier Poet Rhyme

A Dark Day

A  Dark Day

           Dark clouds loom.
           
           Spirits full of gloom

           Thoughts turn to doom.
           
            Together for years.

            Now, eyes full of tears.

           Anger in the voice,

           Leaving us with no choice.

          Accusations of blame.

         Nothing will be the same.

        Two hearts bleed,
       
       Today is a dark day indeed.

                                            Stephen Forcier
                            copyright 10/8/08

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Breana Wiggins December 9, 2008 at 9:16 PM Very deep. I really enjoyed this poem

November 30, 2008 at 8:16 AM Such a sad reflection. Nice use of rhyme. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

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Joseph Spence Sr November 29, 2008 at 6:45 PM This is excellent. I like the flow of the lines and the words. The rhyming pattern is wonderful. Welcome to Poetry Soup and great job! ~Joseph

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