A Dark and Dreary Night

Once upon a time in a very dark and dreary, creepy, place where the wind was howling through the black trees, 
And the branches looked like swords and machetes, I was sitting with my 5 year-old-daughter Susie, if you please.
We were seated in a mini-station-wagon, at a dark and dreary train station waiting for Daddy to arrive on the commuter train, scheduled for 5:03.
If you know me, you know I can be a little impulsive, so on this night, I decided to do something creepy, but what would it be?
Immediately knowing, I turned to my 5-year-old daughter and yelled "BOO!" right in her face, silly 32 year old me.
Susie did not scream. She did not jump.  She merely punched me as hard as I have ever been punched in my nose, a bleed.
I was laugh-crying now. Crying because my nose felt like it had been hit by a semi, laughing at my own stupidity.
Susie felt very sorry for me and kept apologizing over and over. I told her not to worry, I deserved it, me being me.
I had a black and blue nose for awhile, but even after
that faded away, I knew that Susie was assertive to a T.
I was so proud of the fact that I had raised a daughter who did not take any idiocy from anyone, including me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 4/29/2018 9:04:00 PM
As they say, you can't b.s. a kid! Riotous romp, with a great message. Thoroughly enjoyable. :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/29/2018 11:13:00 PM
The funniest part was her trying to console me and me being in complete pain, but laughing, and crying at the same time at my own stupidity. I raised 3 assertive women; what did I think would happen?
Date: 4/28/2018 6:19:00 AM
LOL you know we are all taking Susie's side on this one, Caren. Especially that the black and blue is gone.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/28/2018 10:16:00 AM
I could not quit crying and laughing at the same time. Every time she apologized I felt even more of a horrible, awful, bad, silly, kind of stupid Mommy.
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