A Dance of Tounges 3-3-10

With a touch of starteledness,
lips gently meet for a first date,
slowly they find comfort in the close dance...

Like wandering hands a tounge nudges,
and is allowed entrance to pink taste buds secreted away...

Almost as if new to this experiance,
it begins to join the waltz,
twirling around in a found agreement...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 25, 2010 at 10:58 AM
I don't know about that tounge thing . You put to much imagination in this one . I can vividly see them making out. You are a hit girl
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March 3, 2010 at 9:25 AM
That's a really good poetic way to say their making out. Good poem<3 Emily
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