A Dance

soft caress against lips tongued whispers sigh in romantic beats sweet serenade beneath moon as night fades

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Victoria Teo

Date: 9/7/2019 9:20:00 AM

Saucy!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2019 5:52:00 AM

Very romantic work. If for a contest it has a great chance of being on the winners' list. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/22/2019 6:05:00 AM

Thank you my friend it was just a ploy to coax my muse to write a romantic poem for a contest. This one was not an entry :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2019 3:52:00 PM

this is super sexy and just wonderful!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/19/2019 4:22:00 PM

Thank you Andrea.... :) hugs

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/19/2019 2:02:00 PM

Sizzles with heat, explodes with passion and in my case, makes one want to get up and curl up with their mate! Wow ... CayCay

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/19/2019 4:22:00 PM

Thank you CayCay...wanted to coax my muse to write for a romantic contest...not often she goes this direction~ hugs :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/19/2019 9:53:00 AM

Romantic bliss in this Ninette and beaucoup d'amour! Loved the freshness of this poem - a great write! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/19/2019 4:21:00 PM

Thank you so much Jennifer :) hugs! Have a great day

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2019 5:49:00 AM

- Sounds beautiful and romantic, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/19/2019 4:20:00 PM

Thank you my sweet friend.... hugs :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/19/2019 5:06:00 AM

It all sounds magical, wonderful poetry dear Sandra. Wishing you a wonderful day.

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/19/2019 4:19:00 PM

Thank you Pixie...may you be blessed with a wonderful day as well :) hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/18/2019 11:17:00 PM

A nice romantic verse Sandra. Tom

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/19/2019 4:18:00 PM

Thank you Tom, my muse doesn't go there often so it was my attempt to lure her to write for the collaboration contest! :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/18/2019 8:43:00 PM

That rhyme from 'serenades' to 'fades work so well to give this nice ninette the desired equilibrium. Lovely done, Sandra. :) gw

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/19/2019 4:17:00 PM

Thank you Gershon...i needed to direct my muse towards love for the collaboration contest... hugs :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/18/2019 8:38:00 PM

Lovely, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/19/2019 4:16:00 PM

Thank you Line, hugs :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/18/2019 8:02:00 PM

Great romantic ninette, Sandra! Blessings, Kim

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/19/2019 4:16:00 PM

Thank you Kim, was trying to spark my muse towards a romantic poem :) hugs