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a crescent hanging by a thread breathless AP: 1st place 2024, Honorable Mention 2025 Posted on November 18, 2024

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Date: 1/11/2025 7:29:00 AM
excellent ekphrastic Haiku, Line. Well said succinctly
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Date: 1/11/2025 4:27:00 PM
thank you so much, Oliver ~
Date: 11/27/2024 1:28:00 PM
Wow this is outstanding haiku and a fave for me. Thanks so much for my contest win. Happy Thanksgiving, dear
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Date: 12/10/2024 4:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. Much appreciated ~
Date: 11/27/2024 8:24:00 AM
Hi line,it certainly is breathless, as are all things in our lord's sky. xx
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Date: 12/10/2024 4:19:00 PM
Very true, John ~
Date: 11/27/2024 3:56:00 AM
Hanging on by a thread to the edge of the night sky and slowly rocking side to side as if it’s about to fall to earth…Just me and my mind Line thinking on about your words. :). Cheers - Gary
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Date: 12/10/2024 4:20:00 PM
Delightful, Gary ~
Date: 11/22/2024 7:42:00 AM
Wonderful.
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Date: 12/10/2024 4:20:00 PM
Thanks, Mike ~
Date: 11/21/2024 3:16:00 AM
Perfect description of a crescent moon, Line! Excellent haiku!
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Date: 12/10/2024 4:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura ~
Date: 11/18/2024 10:39:00 PM
Very nice.
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Date: 12/10/2024 4:21:00 PM
Much appreciated, Chris ~
Date: 11/18/2024 8:53:00 PM
Yes! Nothing like a new moon! :) gw
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Date: 11/18/2024 9:01:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/18/2024 5:52:00 PM
Dear Line, your haiku is exquisite! Delicate, perfect. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/18/2024 9:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Susan ~
Date: 11/18/2024 5:18:00 PM
Emotive, Line!
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Date: 11/18/2024 9:00:00 PM
Thank you, Kim ~

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