a crescent

a crescent
hanging by a thread
breathless


AP: 1st place 2024, Honorable Mention 2025

moonnaturenighthaiku

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Oliver Mckeithan

January 11, 2025 at 7:29 AM

excellent ekphrastic Haiku, Line. Well said succinctly

Line Gauthier

January 11, 2025 at 4:27 PM

thank you so much, Oliver ~

Andrea Dietrich

November 27, 2024 at 1:28 PM

Wow this is outstanding haiku and a fave for me. Thanks so much for my contest win. Happy Thanksgiving, dear

Line Gauthier

December 10, 2024 at 4:19 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea. Much appreciated ~

John Read

November 27, 2024 at 8:24 AM

Hi line,it certainly is breathless, as are all things in our lord's sky. xx

Line Gauthier

December 10, 2024 at 4:19 PM

Very true, John ~

Gary Radice

November 27, 2024 at 3:56 AM

Hanging on by a thread to the edge of the night sky and slowly rocking side to side as if it’s about to fall to earth…Just me and my mind Line thinking on about your words. :). Cheers - Gary

Line Gauthier

December 10, 2024 at 4:20 PM

Delightful, Gary ~