A Cowboy's Tragedy

A Cowboy's Tragedy He was young and good looking. He was also a good man. He had a girlfriend, which he was very much in love with. She lived in town, while he lived out on his Ranch. He soon asked her to marry him. She said yes. It was the happiest day of his life. She was very beautiful and his Mother approved of her. The families made arrangements for the preparations of the wedding. Finally the big day came - they had a big wedding all their families and friends were there. Soon after the Honeymoon - they moved into their house. They were very happy and everyone knew it. Some months had gone by and one day he had to take a three day trip. It was a business trip and he had to leave his young bride alone. On the third day - he came back around midnight. It had been raining hard for two days. There was a lot of thunder and lighting When he opened the door and went to the bedroom, with the lighting that came through the window - he saw two bodies covered up on the bed. That's when he went Crazy, he pulled out his gun and shot both of them many times. He knew they were dead. He then went to see who the other man was. To his surprise , when he uncovered them, it was not a man. It was his own Mother. That his wife had asked her to come and keep her company while he was away. His heart was broken and at that moment he went up to a hill and hung himself from a tree. A tragedy that would be told for years to come...
04/26/2014 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo Note: Many years ago this happened in Mexico. For Skat's contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 8:20 AM
You are welcome Lucy for the comment on my comment...LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 11:02 PM
Just coming here to wish you a good night, and sleep well, angel lady!!
A   Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 6:50 PM
LUCY, , EPIC WRITE, EPIC WIN.... CONGRATS... LUV ~LINDA
Carrillo Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 8:20 PM
Thanks Linda for reading...
Callus Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 2:55 PM
What a tragedy you recounted here Lucilla! and you did it so lucidly! Congrats on a fine win. // paul
Carrillo Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 3:10 PM
Thank you so much Paul. Have a blessed day.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 2:37 PM
Congratulations dear Lucy..:)
Carrillo Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 3:09 PM
Thank you so much for reading Olive.
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 9:58 PM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest, Lucillo
Carrillo Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 10:51 PM
Thank you much DR.Ram.
A  Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 7:13 PM
LUCY,, Congrats---- thank you for supporting my "Diamond Dust, Devil" contest. Love ~SKAT~
Carrillo Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 10:52 PM
Thank you Skat.
Sathasivam Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 1:09 AM
A tragic tale. Well done. Enjoyed. Tfs
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 3:11 PM
how are you dear? hope you much better :) with the prose you got me glued and God bless and always, olive :)
Dunn Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 4:24 PM
I know this wells story done good luck in the contest you have a really good chance of winning. cheri
Carrillo Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 5:57 PM
Thank you Cherl;, I don't enter many contests. I shall visit you later.
Onclaud Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 3:46 PM
i feel the loss here, lucy.. this is so engaging!.. reminds me of my grandpa's story about tom dooley..love and huggs!
Carrillo Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 5:31 PM
Thank Nette, Life is not always a bowl of cherries.
Devnath  Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 3:00 PM
A great unexpected tragedy happened. Very sad poem. Though, thanks for sharing. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl
Carrillo Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 5:29 PM
Thank you Bi. You are always so nice.
Wegman Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 8:19 AM
Wow...that is tragic and scary. To think somebody would blindly discharge a weapon without identifying his target's identity...says a LOT about this man's self-esteem and trust issues. SAD!
Carrillo Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Thank you for reading Michael; It was sad and very tragic.
Gasun Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 12:48 AM
Oh my, an amazing poem with a unique story which seldom happens but it leaves so much lesson in one's life my dear friend Lucilla. Thank you so much for sharing! Hope you've a great weekend to you and your loved ones. Thank u so much as well for stopping by on one of my poems. Sending hugs! love lots, Leonora
Carrillo Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 7:25 AM
Thank you very much for reading, just some of the true facts of life.
Duggan Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 7:59 PM
OMG. Lucilla what a wonderful story, very tragic but the way you have put it down on paper is terrific, I loved it from beginning to end. Take care..............Vera..........
Carrillo Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 9:09 PM
Hi Vera; I'm glad that you liked it. I will check on you poems later. I am kind of tired.
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 7:32 PM
OMG. this is the most unexpected ending i have seen in ages. WOW> that will treach THAT damn macho man a lesson to never forget. IDIOT
Carrillo Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 9:05 PM
Thanks Andrea; I had thought of writing a poem about the difference between a Macho man and a real man. we'll see.
Harrell Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 5:13 PM
I don't like this. I like your poem but I don't like the story. Tragic!
Carrillo Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 5:26 PM
Thank you for reading. That was very tragic. I understand.
Carroll Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 3:39 PM
Buen dia Lucillla..Nice slice of life write.
Carrillo Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 4:11 PM
Porque, tu no has hecho nada. No hay que pedir disculpas.
Carroll Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 3:40 PM
discúlpeme..Lucilla..
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 10:29 AM
Oh Lucilla what a simply tragic tale - had me hooked from start to finish - just needs an 'I' on it for the business trip xx Hugs Jan xxxx
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 11:11 AM
Lucilla its always a joy to read your work. Thinking of you hugs Jan xxxx
Carrillo Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 11:07 AM
Thank you so much. I will take care of that. I have problems with my vision, since last year in November that I had a heart attack and a stroke. I have to have eye surgery, but can't do it now. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace