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A Couple of Haiku

Dancing flowers of spring The rain makes you grow soon A new season is born The rain comes down hard Forming puddles on the ground Drenching the hard soil

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Date: 5/5/2016 4:46:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Matthew:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/30/2016 10:11:00 AM
Congratulation my lovely friend on your beautiful win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/30/2016 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations Matthew on your win. You write with confidence and power, and most of all beauty and diversity! Keep up the good work as I continue to read your works! _ Hansteven
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Date: 4/29/2016 5:42:00 PM
Hi Matthew, Loved the Haiku, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Mike.
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Date: 4/29/2016 10:28:00 AM
Hi Matt, Congratulations on your Beauty and Diversity WIN:):):) I thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "A Writer" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/13/2016 7:40:00 AM
Very nice spring poems Matthew. Anne
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Date: 4/12/2016 4:04:00 PM
Nice spring poetry, Matt. Not sure they are exactly haiku. (but not many of us are actually writing haiku around here!!)
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Date: 4/12/2016 2:14:00 PM
great haiku's Matthew, enjoyed:)
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Date: 4/12/2016 1:09:00 PM
Yes, nice and invigorating six lines Matthew.
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Date: 4/12/2016 12:39:00 PM
lovely imagery Matthew:-) hugs Jan xx
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