A Country Called Earth

This is what may be seen, by eyes that look forward passed fog and smoke, of institutional making: The people, burn national building and flag for they are made fearless by the robbery of an entire planet's freedom. A one world governance is a one world potion for poverty mother Earth is to be murdered by monetary law. I say; let flags burn and be gone with invisible borders. Let us pledge allegiance to the country called Earth.

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Jaafar Sadig El Waad

Date: 11/10/2014 5:58:00 AM

Sounds like the desire for planetary country for all with no boundaries and at all! Like it very much!willl also keep an eye out for your work!

Kim Van Breda

Date: 10/20/2014 3:20:00 AM

Hi JB Excellent. I love it when people write with passion on a theme/topic like this.

JB Jacob or Koos Van Rensburg
Date: 10/20/2014 6:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, the piece is part of a collection im assembling for a semester project in Creatice writing.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2014 12:17:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, JB - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

JB Jacob or Koos Van Rensburg
Date: 10/20/2014 6:04:00 AM

Thank you so much for welcoming me. I've never found an onine space where people actually engange me about my writing. I will most certainly read the works of others and do the same! Thank you again for the warm welcome and the awesome comment.