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A Cool Winter Time

Poetry flows above me I ghost write and show the lyrics disguise me. City lacks the spirit. The living room the xmas tree. Ornaments are bored trapped inside the box the style is free. Bruce lee said it'll separates us. 50 said to change it up if they hate let them hate and watch the money pile up. Thats how it is now a days. If its funny ill record it. Cartoons for my nephews. I remember I had curfew, moms perfume on dads clothes and Pine soul on the furniture. I show the past not to reflect the future or to rap the precent. Just to give the message that we are still in a checklist. So far I've survived this beautiful nightmare. So long i deserve to dream. My eyes recognize the year passed me by. A poet destroyed but felt welcomed back in with an invite. Its a cold world i cool it down with ice. She's real nice. Life is ice in the winter time.

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Date: 1/18/2015 4:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this creative write.
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Fernando Vergara
Date: 1/18/2015 7:04:00 PM
thank u
Date: 1/18/2015 2:56:00 AM
Life is ice in the winter time- a very grand conclusion. You deserved win. Congrats.Love Fernanado>>>>rajat
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Fernando Vergara
Date: 1/18/2015 7:05:00 PM
thank u
Date: 1/17/2015 8:48:00 PM
Amazing cool night, congrats on the win,
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Fernando Vergara
Date: 1/18/2015 7:06:00 PM
thank you dr.
Date: 1/17/2015 7:10:00 PM
Great descriptive write many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Fernando Vergara
Date: 1/18/2015 7:04:00 PM
thanks jan
Date: 1/17/2015 7:09:00 PM
Fernando, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Top Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Fernando Vergara
Date: 1/18/2015 7:04:00 PM
thank u linda good looking out. n i sure will
Date: 1/17/2015 7:08:00 PM
Fernando, this poem was fun and drew me in from start to finish. I enjoyed the flow... PD
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