A Cool Winter Time

Poetry flows above me
I ghost write and show the lyrics disguise me.
City lacks the spirit.
The living room the xmas tree.
Ornaments are bored trapped inside the box 
the style is free.
Bruce lee said it'll separates us. 
50 said to change it up
if they hate let them hate and watch the money pile up.
Thats how it is now a days. 
If its funny ill record it. 
Cartoons for my nephews.
I remember I had curfew, 
moms perfume on dads clothes and Pine soul on the furniture. 
I show the past not to reflect the future or to rap the precent. 
Just to give the message that we are still in a checklist. 
So far I've survived this beautiful nightmare. 
So long i deserve to dream. 
My eyes recognize the year passed me by. 
A poet destroyed but felt welcomed back in with an invite. 
Its a cold world i cool it down with ice. 
She's real nice.
Life is ice in the winter time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:59 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this creative write.
Vergara Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 7:04 PM
thank u
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:56 AM
Life is ice in the winter time- a very grand conclusion. You deserved win. Congrats.Love Fernanado>>>>rajat
Vergara Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 7:05 PM
thank u
Mehta Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 8:48 PM
Amazing cool night, congrats on the win,
Vergara Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 7:06 PM
thank you dr.
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:10 PM
Great descriptive write many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Vergara Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 7:04 PM
thanks jan
A   Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:09 PM
Fernando, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Top Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Vergara Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 7:04 PM
thank u linda good looking out. n i sure will
A   Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 7:08 PM
Fernando, this poem was fun and drew me in from start to finish. I enjoyed the flow... PD
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