A Cool Breeze
a cool breeze from the mountains
sweetly it comes down
refreshing and reviving
freshness does surround
like the ebbing of the tide
upon the beach I love
like the lyrics that I sing
from one of my favorite songs
with a taste of creme brulee'
a dessert that is my fave
or a prayer that I offer
at the end of my long day
there just aren't enough metaphors
or adjectives to describe
the feelings you bring to me
since you came into my life...
a cool breeze from the mountains
sweetly it comes down
my valley was never greener
than when you were around
Copyright © Jo Bien | Year Posted 2010
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