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A Cool Breeze

a cool breeze from the mountains sweetly it comes down refreshing and reviving freshness does surround like the ebbing of the tide upon the beach I love like the lyrics that I sing from one of my favorite songs with a taste of creme brulee' a dessert that is my fave or a prayer that I offer at the end of my long day there just aren't enough metaphors or adjectives to describe the feelings you bring to me since you came into my life... a cool breeze from the mountains sweetly it comes down my valley was never greener than when you were around

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