A Convenient Escape

To blame God for everything really,
Man does in freedom on this Earth -
Is a Convenient Escape,  logically,
For results that our human actions birth.

As all of us are born free to choose,
Decide to be king over our Fate,
Choices that we do to win or lose,
Mark the goals or traps that we create.

We are free to rise and maybe soar,
Free to wallow in Defeat and Pain,
Free to find dreams we are looking for -
Free to stand up and begin again.

We are not born puppets on some strings,
Unable to think and make our moves.
We were created as intelligent beings!
We choose and decide, as our lives prove.

Freedom requires Responsibility.
God or no God, we will reap what we do!
We face consequences inevitably,
Some are dreadful and hurting,  that's true.

So to blame God for all our failings -
Or what Man,  in Humanity, has become,
Is not only denying our Will at deciding
On a noble existence,  before the end of life comes.



Cynthia Buhain Baello
August 5, 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/10/2012 10:21:00 AM
I am stopping by your list of poetry to read a poem and thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Cynthia. It is a pleasure to read your writing. Hope you are enjoying this beautiful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2012 1:19:00 PM
A insightful poem you have penned. Yes, we reap what we sow and free will helps us decide our path. Deep thought put into this write. love phyl
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Date: 8/5/2012 7:19:00 AM
Such well writen piece ... very enjoyed.. Michael
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