Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Grook

A Concept

Concept of two people living together
For more than a good number of years
Without having spoken a cross word
It suggests a lack of spirit simply
That got to be admired in fish only.

                        +++

**Inspired by the fish photo on the contest page


April 11, 2014
Form : Grook
Dr. Ram Mehta
Tenth Place win
Contest: Any Poem #20 by Linda, PD

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Kelly Deschler April 23, 2014 at 12:44 PM No one can live together for years and not have an argument. If they can, than that is great, but it would be a very dull life! A great poem, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats.

Paul Callus April 22, 2014 at 12:47 PM Enjoyed this Dr. Can't imagine a couple never exchanging a cross word...unless they have no tongue or emotion! // congrats on win. // paul

Sam Toil April 22, 2014 at 7:41 AM Beautifully said, Dr. Ram. Individuals of character must on occasion argue. If they don't -- well as you put it, they are simply cold, dead "fish". I loved your poem. Peace...Sam

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 22, 2014 at 5:33 AM Dr Ram this is a great poem,,, wonderful win on a great poem !

Connie Marcum Wong April 22, 2014 at 4:00 AM I agree and a lack of passion of which I could not live without. A wonderful write Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win! This sure was a popular contest. Lots of competition!

Sam Raj April 22, 2014 at 2:28 AM Congrats on your win. Nice poem, true. People can live together, without speaking a cross word.....? I would rather be single, as such I am. I differ with you, it must be lack of love. Thanks for sharing. keep in touch sir.m

Poet Destroyer A April 21, 2014 at 9:59 PM DR RAM, Congratulations, AWESOME POEM:) Thank you so much for taking your time in supporting my contest... Always & Forever *Linda

Scott Thirtyseven April 11, 2014 at 10:24 PM Or that one often went fishing. I like the way you've explored this subject, and what a fun conclusion. Enjoyable read.