A Concept

Concept of two people living together For more than a good number of years Without having spoken a cross word It suggests a lack of spirit simply That got to be admired in fish only. +++ **Inspired by the fish photo on the contest page April 11, 2014 Form : Grook Dr. Ram Mehta Tenth Place win Contest: Any Poem #20 by Linda, PD

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/23/2014 12:44:00 PM

No one can live together for years and not have an argument. If they can, than that is great, but it would be a very dull life! A great poem, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/22/2014 12:47:00 PM

Enjoyed this Dr. Can't imagine a couple never exchanging a cross word...unless they have no tongue or emotion! // congrats on win. // paul

Sam Toil

Date: 4/22/2014 7:41:00 AM

Beautifully said, Dr. Ram. Individuals of character must on occasion argue. If they don't -- well as you put it, they are simply cold, dead "fish". I loved your poem. Peace...Sam

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/22/2014 5:33:00 AM

Dr Ram this is a great poem,,, wonderful win on a great poem !

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/22/2014 4:00:00 AM

I agree and a lack of passion of which I could not live without. A wonderful write Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win! This sure was a popular contest. Lots of competition!

Sam Raj

Date: 4/22/2014 2:28:00 AM

Congrats on your win. Nice poem, true. People can live together, without speaking a cross word.....? I would rather be single, as such I am. I differ with you, it must be lack of love. Thanks for sharing. keep in touch sir.m

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2014 9:59:00 PM

DR RAM, Congratulations, AWESOME POEM:) Thank you so much for taking your time in supporting my contest... Always & Forever *Linda

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 4/11/2014 10:24:00 PM

Or that one often went fishing. I like the way you've explored this subject, and what a fun conclusion. Enjoyable read.