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A Comfort

Collection - 1. 8. Now, the feelings of love, comfort me, as I feel your heart, Why then, a coldness, that seems to come out of the heart of darkness? But a momentary thought and then love-light returns.

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Date: 5/26/2020 8:10:00 AM
Hello Mike I have been there many times. Yet I do come out of it in time. Enjou your day my friend.
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Date: 10/18/2019 7:46:00 AM
It seems I am drawn back to this one again.
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Date: 9/17/2019 7:04:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 10/18/2019 3:59:00 AM
Hi Richard, thank you for dropping by and the re-read on this write, it is much appreciated. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 9/15/2019 3:07:00 PM
Hmmm...interesting thoughts..I think only you know the answer to this question.. Intriguing few lines..
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Date: 9/16/2019 4:18:00 PM
Hi Silent, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. On the odd occasion, a minute moment of grey shall come into my thoughts. Just a simple write on that moment. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 9/14/2019 11:09:00 AM
Oh, that is a odd feeling But a massive comfort when live light returns Panagiota Thank you!
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 9/16/2019 4:06:00 PM
Hi Panagiota, thank you for dropping by and the like on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. We can have those minute thoughts of indecision within the world of love. A world of light, dark and many different shades of gray. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 9/11/2019 6:50:00 AM
- We know, my friend - love is not a dance on roses :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 9/12/2019 7:55:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Light and dark, love has many shades. The heart did sing as it chose. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 9/10/2019 5:08:00 PM
I beg to differ, I think you are good at whatever you put your hand too. Also it is my pleasure to read your work, no thanks are required.
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Date: 9/10/2019 11:21:00 AM
Yes at times one can feel a void that may not be present. Bathe in the love light my friend.
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Date: 9/10/2019 2:47:00 PM
Hi Richard, I am with you there, Bathe in the love-light. Hi Richard, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece. it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am not that good at these shorter forms. I should persevere. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.

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