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A Comet

Fly in the sky, you, giant hornet, towards the sun, against the wind. Shine in the light, eccentric comet, into the dark you`d better fling. Arrange the show and die in harness, let here star shower`s hour run. You – surveyor`s stake in total darkness, Cosmos is not for sign a bar. Exhaust yourself in fleeting dancing, let after all the summer fun, and rush away, you, cosmic lancer, to catch up with a falling sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/8/2010 8:08:00 AM
magical verse! Oleg! well done, and thanks for your always welcome comments! jimbo
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Date: 2/7/2010 7:04:00 AM
Oleg thank you for your welcome blog comments today Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/6/2010 10:24:00 AM
Interesting metaphoric language and comparisons here in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:35:00 PM
Wonderful poem...enjoyed reading...Marty
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Date: 2/5/2010 2:29:00 PM
I enjoyed that thanks
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Date: 2/5/2010 1:59:00 PM
Good use of metophor, deep thought provolking poem, thanks for sharring. Judy Riley
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Date: 2/5/2010 1:41:00 PM
We all look to the heavens, you see it better than most , thanks Daniel
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