Russell Sivey Poet Haiku

A Cold Winter's Breath

a cold winter’s breath
freezing limbs in the bare woods ---
bone chilled finger points

Russell Sivey

NOTE: I really like this poem, one of my favorites! Submitted: 2/17/2012
CONTEST BY: Juxtaposition Haiku
SPONSOR : Charles Henderson


Entrant into PD's "Only #1 poems... For #1 contest winners only.." contest

3/3/2012

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Line Gauthier September 22, 2017 at 2:17 PM Beautiful haiku. Congrats.

Kim Merryman March 7, 2012 at 9:26 PM Congrats on your HM in PD's contest, Russell! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown March 7, 2012 at 6:29 AM A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Russell. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley March 6, 2012 at 8:25 AM Congratulations on your HM Russell

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 5, 2012 at 8:35 PM I liked this the first time I read it...congrats on your win. Blessings, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 5, 2012 at 8:20 PM congrats Russell on HM for a top notch entry... awesome as always luv..

Ralph Taylor March 5, 2012 at 9:50 AM Congrats, Russ. Awesome write. Great job. Nice going, my friend. Ralph

Sashi Prabhu March 5, 2012 at 7:36 AM superb Haiku.... congrats on HM .....~sashi

Poet Destroyer A March 4, 2012 at 7:04 PM Russell .congratulations! in my contest...muched enjoyed your entry,;-) always*PD

Gautami Phookan February 25, 2012 at 12:59 PM Amazing!! Loved this piece of haiku, simply beautiful how you wrote.. Congrats Russell on your super win in this contest!!! Nice weekend...

Kim Merryman February 25, 2012 at 9:58 AM Congrats on your wonderful 1st place win, Russell! Love, Kim

Olusegun Arowolo February 24, 2012 at 11:46 AM wonderful and beautiful write,Russell.a good description of cold winter.....Congratulations on your well deserved win in Charles`contest...

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2012 at 5:27 AM Congratulations on your win in Charles' Haiku contest Russell. Love, Carol

Kash Poet February 24, 2012 at 4:21 AM Russell,congratulations on your 1st place win in Charle's contest.Very nice haiku.

Nette Onclaud February 23, 2012 at 10:53 PM amazingly, a gem of a 'ku, russell... cheers to you for the top win! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2012 at 8:44 PM Hey, it goes well with my tree poem too!! LOVE IT, Russell. I can see why it won. Congratulations to you!!

Carrie Richards February 23, 2012 at 7:34 PM Congratulations Russell, a challenge you met!!

Charlotte Puddifoot February 23, 2012 at 6:15 PM congrats on your 1st place win; this is indeed a stunning haiku deserving of its placement :-)

Gwendolen Song February 23, 2012 at 5:32 PM A hard art to master...u did it well...Congrats Russell!! Maybe you could earn a double major...wow. Gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi February 23, 2012 at 5:23 PM Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Charles Henderson February 23, 2012 at 5:12 PM Thank you for being in my contest, a stellar poem you came up with, which certainly deserved it placement.

Don Johnson February 22, 2012 at 12:01 AM yes i went south one winter, never again 4 me, cold feet n hands was not so grand.. stay in warm Queensland now u c

Broken Butterfly February 19, 2012 at 8:02 AM Russell, I am no haiku expert but I think yours is outstanding, best of luck and thanks for all your comments and support

Sara Kendrick February 19, 2012 at 5:31 AM Enjoyed reading this morn..Winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by...Someday maybe all areas of my life will be like a well cut diamond..Sara

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer February 18, 2012 at 2:51 PM Nice one Russel! I think Charles will like it :)