A Cold Haiku, Number 3

a birth premature
the lake is melting early
his hand touches hers
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Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 8:50 PM
oh this is so sweet. I sure enjoyed this one.
Carber Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 9:39 AM
Thanks Andrea, I'm happy you liked it--and may you have a happy 2020!
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 9:10 PM
great imagery,, Haiku are so hard to do.. to get the right image in peoples mind to make it good and you did it well.
Carber Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Thanks Eve--yes, they must be subtle, gentle, evocative-- not something our culture is given to--have a very happy new year!
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