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A Cold Haiku, number 3

a birth premature the lake is melting early his hand touches hers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/27/2019 8:50:00 PM
oh this is so sweet. I sure enjoyed this one.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/28/2019 9:39:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I'm happy you liked it--and may you have a happy 2020!
Date: 12/15/2019 9:10:00 PM
great imagery,, Haiku are so hard to do.. to get the right image in peoples mind to make it good and you did it well.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/28/2019 9:40:00 AM
Thanks Eve--yes, they must be subtle, gentle, evocative-- not something our culture is given to--have a very happy new year!