A Clouded Sky

It’s about to rain,
Thunder rumbles in the air;
Lightening cracks the sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 6, 2009 at 5:00 PM
The power of a storm. Nice imagery! -Alley
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April 3, 2009 at 8:51 PM
I like the rain too, nice work
Martin Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 7:57 PM
I like to stand in the rain, nice haiku. Tyler
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April 3, 2009 at 1:48 PM
Excellent hauku, Daniel! We are just now emerging from five days of rain in North Florida. The thunder was frightening.
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April 3, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Excellent beauty, rain clouds are nice to watch. Great haiku...Raul
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April 3, 2009 at 11:47 AM
a great summer haiku! Daniel! Jim
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