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A Clouded Sky

It’s about to rain, Thunder rumbles in the air; Lightening cracks the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/6/2009 5:00:00 PM
The power of a storm. Nice imagery! -Alley
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:51:00 PM
I like the rain too, nice work
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Date: 4/3/2009 7:57:00 PM
I like to stand in the rain, nice haiku. Tyler
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Date: 4/3/2009 1:48:00 PM
Excellent hauku, Daniel! We are just now emerging from five days of rain in North Florida. The thunder was frightening.
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:54:00 AM
Excellent beauty, rain clouds are nice to watch. Great haiku...Raul
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:47:00 AM
a great summer haiku! Daniel! Jim
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