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her gait reminds me of her name.... a closed chapter ================== Placement:9th;(September 2011) Contest:Any haiku will do Sponsor:Irma Linda

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Date: 9/28/2011 8:24:00 AM
Dear Kash---Although you are away, you better be writing in your poet's notebook to keep the energy flowing! Your work is missed....I know...your brain is on are forgiven. ha ha. Gwendolen
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Date: 9/21/2011 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Any Haiku Will Do" Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2011 11:32:00 AM
i seem to be the only one who doesn't get this. anyway, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/18/2011 9:33:00 AM
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Date: 9/18/2011 7:29:00 AM
I completely GET THIS ONE! You sly dog! lololololol. You are definately in a new chapter....that chapter must have been eons ago! Great haiku. I had to read it twice! Gwendolen
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Date: 9/18/2011 7:23:00 AM
Beautifully written and enjoyed it. Congratulation for your win. bl
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Date: 9/18/2011 6:24:00 AM
kash congrats on your win, i wonder what her name is?..david
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Date: 9/18/2011 3:54:00 AM
Kash,, a wonderful .Congratulations on your Haiku win, ;-). Thank you so much for entering and sharing your poem.Thanks for supporting my contest,, God bless,... LINDA
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:27:00 PM
ey there, moonwalker.. yup, it's for tracie; dang this headache, ahooo! ( turns into a wolf!)
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Date: 9/17/2011 2:53:00 PM
hello, bengali tiger!...where's you muse?? rwahhhrrr! natalie's contest did not specify only one dodoitsu... so there.. what's new?? miss your songs!! :) huggs to you, kashi..:) nette
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:39:00 PM
this one makes me cringe in its own sense of beauty , kashi... the last line cliches the 'ku... terrific! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/16/2011 12:20:00 PM
hmmm, this one is mysterious, Kash. Do you mean the way she walks reminds you of her name or do you mean her name sounds like gait? I like it! And thanks for getting up a new poem today!! (old soupmail if you didn't see it)
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Date: 9/16/2011 12:01:00 PM
wow Kash I just said the same last line to an old flame who contacted me a few days ago.. awesome to close a bad chapter in life.. great extension of feelings luv..
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Date: 9/16/2011 11:33:00 AM
Oooh! youchy! but what's done is done, right? Next chapter please! and thanks for dropping by my new poem, yikes, seems like I haven't written in ages, lol ;)
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Date: 9/16/2011 11:42:00 AM
haha! well you sure got me, kash :p well that's good to know though ;)-- keep on writing!