A Closed Chapter

her gait
reminds me of her name....
a closed chapter



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Placement:9th;(September 2011)

Contest:Any haiku will do

Sponsor:Irma Linda

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/28/2011 8:24:00 AM
Dear Kash---Although you are away, you better be writing in your poet's notebook to keep the energy flowing! Your work is missed....I know...your brain is on hiatus....you are forgiven. ha ha. Gwendolen
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Date: 9/21/2011 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Any Haiku Will Do" Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2011 11:32:00 AM
i seem to be the only one who doesn't get this. anyway, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/18/2011 9:33:00 AM
CONGRATS KASH MY FRIEND ON ANOTHER GRAND WIN WITH AWESOME HAIKU WORDS LUV..
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Date: 9/18/2011 7:29:00 AM
I completely GET THIS ONE! You sly dog! lololololol. You are definately in a new chapter....that chapter must have been eons ago! Great haiku. I had to read it twice! Gwendolen
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Date: 9/18/2011 7:23:00 AM
Beautifully written and enjoyed it. Congratulation for your win. bl
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Date: 9/18/2011 6:24:00 AM
kash congrats on your win, i wonder what her name is?..david
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Date: 9/18/2011 3:54:00 AM
Kash,, a wonderful .Congratulations on your Haiku win, ;-). Thank you so much for entering and sharing your poem.Thanks for supporting my contest,, God bless,... LINDA
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:27:00 PM
ey there, moonwalker.. yup, it's for tracie; dang this headache, ahooo! ( turns into a wolf!)
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Date: 9/17/2011 2:53:00 PM
hello, bengali tiger!...where's you muse?? rwahhhrrr! natalie's contest did not specify only one dodoitsu... so there.. what's new?? miss your songs!! :) huggs to you, kashi..:) nette
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:39:00 PM
this one makes me cringe in its own sense of beauty , kashi... the last line cliches the 'ku... terrific! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/16/2011 12:20:00 PM
hmmm, this one is mysterious, Kash. Do you mean the way she walks reminds you of her name or do you mean her name sounds like gait? I like it! And thanks for getting up a new poem today!! (old soupmail if you didn't see it)
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Date: 9/16/2011 12:01:00 PM
wow Kash I just said the same last line to an old flame who contacted me a few days ago.. awesome to close a bad chapter in life.. great extension of feelings luv..
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Date: 9/16/2011 11:33:00 AM
Oooh! youchy! but what's done is done, right? Next chapter please! and thanks for dropping by my new poem, yikes, seems like I haven't written in ages, lol ;)
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Date: 9/16/2011 11:42:00 AM
haha! well you sure got me, kash :p well that's good to know though ;)-- keep on writing!
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