A Closed Chapter

her gait
reminds me of her name....
a closed chapter



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Placement:9th;(September 2011)

Contest:Any haiku will do

Sponsor:Irma Linda
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 28, 2011 at 8:24 AM
Dear Kash---Although you are away, you better be writing in your poet's notebook to keep the energy flowing! Your work is missed....I know...your brain is on hiatus....you are forgiven. ha ha. Gwendolen
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September 21, 2011 at 2:53 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Any Haiku Will Do" Kashinath. Love, Carol
Susan Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 11:32 AM
i seem to be the only one who doesn't get this. anyway, congrats on your win :)
Sweetheart Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 9:33 AM
CONGRATS KASH MY FRIEND ON ANOTHER GRAND WIN WITH AWESOME HAIKU WORDS LUV..
Song Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 7:29 AM
I completely GET THIS ONE! You sly dog! lololololol. You are definately in a new chapter....that chapter must have been eons ago! Great haiku. I had to read it twice! Gwendolen
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September 18, 2011 at 7:23 AM
Beautifully written and enjoyed it. Congratulation for your win. bl
Williams Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 6:24 AM
kash congrats on your win, i wonder what her name is?..david
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September 18, 2011 at 3:54 AM
Kash,, a wonderful .Congratulations on your Haiku win, ;-). Thank you so much for entering and sharing your poem.Thanks for supporting my contest,, God bless,... LINDA
Onclaud Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 3:27 PM
ey there, moonwalker.. yup, it's for tracie; dang this headache, ahooo! ( turns into a wolf!)
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September 17, 2011 at 2:53 PM
hello, bengali tiger!...where's you muse?? rwahhhrrr! natalie's contest did not specify only one dodoitsu... so there.. what's new?? miss your songs!! :) huggs to you, kashi..:) nette
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September 16, 2011 at 1:39 PM
this one makes me cringe in its own sense of beauty , kashi... the last line cliches the 'ku... terrific! :) huggs, nette
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September 16, 2011 at 12:20 PM
hmmm, this one is mysterious, Kash. Do you mean the way she walks reminds you of her name or do you mean her name sounds like gait? I like it! And thanks for getting up a new poem today!! (old soupmail if you didn't see it)
Sweetheart Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 12:01 PM
wow Kash I just said the same last line to an old flame who contacted me a few days ago.. awesome to close a bad chapter in life.. great extension of feelings luv..
K. Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 11:33 AM
Oooh! youchy! but what's done is done, right? Next chapter please! and thanks for dropping by my new poem, yikes, seems like I haven't written in ages, lol ;)
K. Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 11:42 AM
haha! well you sure got me, kash :p well that's good to know though ;)-- keep on writing!
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