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A Close Friend

Can I tell you my thoughts and you promise to keep them well Like secrets of your own that you'd never tell My thoughts on love, my thoughts on life. As if i were a curious child who mind runs wild at night. When my battles in life get tough and I've decided I've had enough. To close my eyes and want to never open them again, the thought of death was once a close friend. I've overcome that thought, I'm smiling again and I've found a new friend. I call him "Life", and he's greater than my sins. He protects me, walks with me in life. He makes sure the paths i take are only right. He never deceives me, nor does he ever leave me. He's my shield when stones are cast upon me. It is he that breathes life into me and shows me a new day. I've lived, learn, and I've loved I only imagined what lies above To stop the beatings of my heart, or decide when it starts, is not mine of choice. I look to him when I feel I've been left in the dark. - Oct 6, 2012

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Date: 12/16/2012 6:44:00 PM
this is very good love the flow and wording used thank you for commenting on my poem WHat I See
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Date: 11/8/2012 12:14:00 PM
Sadness, deperation and hope all rolled into one. In the end trusting the giver of life, well done.
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Ashley Renee
Date: 11/8/2012 3:28:00 PM
thank u for your :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/8/2012 12:15:00 PM
I meant desperation.
Date: 10/31/2012 3:41:00 PM
A lovely poem Ashley. - Have a lovely afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Ashley Renee
Date: 11/8/2012 3:30:00 PM
Thank u for your comment, i will be checking out your work soon. :-)
Date: 10/6/2012 9:56:00 AM
Yes life is beautiful...much enjoyed your poem...very well written!!
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Ashley Renee
Date: 10/7/2012 12:23:00 AM
thank you so much! I'll have to stop by and check some of yours out. :-)

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