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A Circle of Life

A nest full of helpless chicks await A mother osprey in search of  food Her eyes trained on a school of bait To take back to her hungry brood  In an instinctive quest for survival She is meticulously dissecting the ocean At the nest they await her arrival   In a blind raucous helpless commotion  A large school of plump bunker surface  To avoid bigger fish swimming deep Unaware of the danger above them Mother osprey has promises to keep.  

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 5/14/2014 12:15:00 PM
Joe, much to think about here... enjoyed how you expressed the Circle of Life...xox..Linda
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Date: 5/14/2014 2:23:00 PM
Linda, Thank you. Apologies for not letting you know that I love your work; it is immediate, raw and yet beautifully sensitive, well done. I do most of my work on my Iphone and therefore do not always catch the most recent submissions.