A Cinquain For Mothers Day

Raindrops
I must collect
In a jar on my desk
For all the tears my mum shed through
My storms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Oyewole Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 12:54 AM
Deeply written. Congrats on your win. AO
Dom Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 6:49 AM
Thank you AO, and all of the below. This cinquain was one of my first three attempts at the style and I am glad to have your appreciation.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 7:12 AM
Lovely, congratulations
Bacha Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 10:45 PM
Congratulations Dom, what a piece of art. Few words, so deep and original. Loved it. Terry xo a 7>>> a FAV.
Dom Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 6:49 AM
:-)
A   Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 10:11 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, MICHAEL! Thank you for the nice and wonderful heartfelt poem about mom's. ~LOVE~ Linda
Liwayway Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 7:29 AM
nice write my friend Michael..thanks for dropping by :) Good day.. Maria
Dom Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 6:47 AM
Thanks Maria. I always like to stop by when I can. Cheers!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 3:23 AM
How true! Indebted forever! Beautiful! Thank you!
Dom Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 1:56 AM
Ta, very!
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