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A Cinquain For Mothers Day

Raindrops I must collect In a jar on my desk For all the tears my mum shed through My storms

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/18/2013 12:54:00 AM

Deeply written. Congrats on your win. AO

Michael Dom
Date: 5/21/2013 6:49:00 AM

Thank you AO, and all of the below. This cinquain was one of my first three attempts at the style and I am glad to have your appreciation.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/17/2013 7:12:00 AM

Lovely, congratulations

Therese Bacha

Date: 5/16/2013 10:45:00 PM

Congratulations Dom, what a piece of art. Few words, so deep and original. Loved it. Terry xo a 7>>> a FAV.

Michael Dom
Date: 5/21/2013 6:49:00 AM

:-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/16/2013 10:11:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS, MICHAEL! Thank you for the nice and wonderful heartfelt poem about mom's. ~LOVE~ Linda

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 5/13/2013 7:29:00 AM

nice write my friend Michael..thanks for dropping by :) Good day.. Maria

Michael Dom
Date: 5/21/2013 6:47:00 AM

Thanks Maria. I always like to stop by when I can. Cheers!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/12/2013 3:23:00 AM

How true! Indebted forever! Beautiful! Thank you!

Michael Dom
Date: 5/13/2013 1:56:00 AM

Ta, very!