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A cinquain for Mothers Day

Raindrops I must collect In a jar on my desk For all the tears my mum shed through My storms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/18/2013 12:54:00 AM
Deeply written. Congrats on your win. AO
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Michael Dom
Date: 5/21/2013 6:49:00 AM
Thank you AO, and all of the below. This cinquain was one of my first three attempts at the style and I am glad to have your appreciation.
Date: 5/17/2013 7:12:00 AM
Lovely, congratulations
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Date: 5/16/2013 10:45:00 PM
Congratulations Dom, what a piece of art. Few words, so deep and original. Loved it. Terry xo a 7>>> a FAV.
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Michael Dom
Date: 5/21/2013 6:49:00 AM
:-)
Date: 5/16/2013 10:11:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, MICHAEL! Thank you for the nice and wonderful heartfelt poem about mom's. ~LOVE~ Linda
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Date: 5/13/2013 7:29:00 AM
nice write my friend Michael..thanks for dropping by :) Good day.. Maria
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Michael Dom
Date: 5/21/2013 6:47:00 AM
Thanks Maria. I always like to stop by when I can. Cheers!
Date: 5/12/2013 3:23:00 AM
How true! Indebted forever! Beautiful! Thank you!
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Michael Dom
Date: 5/13/2013 1:56:00 AM
Ta, very!