A Christmas Snow

Carolers sing in front of a garland draped door In scarf and boot turn, spill grog into snow pour. Approaching our porch with, “Come ye faithful” Open the door and come, let’s adore the merciful. To the smell of chimney smoke add the sight, Of the warm glow from window's light; And there's no question, no question at all, Christmas has surely come with the snowfall! There is subtle sweetness in the sun’s glow As people’s shadows fall on the white snow. Together the flakes form a soft, white blanket That covers everything in sight as if in anklet Barren trees, branches in twig like manner The winter has come with his stern scanner. Look there on the roof how the icicles hang Winter has taken rest from sturm und drang. Then they will go from house to house to greet In the eve, watch nativity plays on the street.
+++ December 6, 2014 Form: Rhyme Dr. Ram Mehta Fourth Place Win Contest: A Christmas Snow by Gail Angel Doyle

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Date: 12/26/2014 9:02:00 PM
DR RAM, Congratulations on your awesome "*Christmas Snow*" win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/22/2014 12:23:00 AM
Lovely winter imagery, Dr Ram! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/19/2014 1:21:00 AM
Winter is such a cold time of the year, but it is also the time when our hearts are at their warmest... I enjoyed this lovely poem, Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/18/2014 6:50:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Dr. Mehta.
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Date: 12/13/2014 9:39:00 AM
Enjoyed reading about the winter of Christmas past with smoking chimneys. I remember them well. Congrats on your win x
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Date: 12/13/2014 8:58:00 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Nice job creating sight, sound, feel and aroma of the season. Congratulations on your excellent win. Have a very Merry Christmas season. Earl
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Date: 12/13/2014 2:29:00 AM
congrats on win Ram great poem hugs
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Date: 12/12/2014 9:52:00 PM
Beautiful, Dr. Ram! Congratuations!
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Date: 12/12/2014 9:20:00 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on your win as well!
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Date: 12/12/2014 9:16:00 PM
congratulations Dr. M on your win nicely done
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Date: 12/12/2014 11:58:00 AM
This deserves its crown, congrats on the win Dr....huggs
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Date: 12/7/2014 1:22:00 PM
Truly wonderful couplets my friend. A joy to read this poem today. Images sent that ring with me and memories of snow-filled Christmas as a child. Very solid 7 on this write!.
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Date: 12/7/2014 12:01:00 AM
a fresh view Ram great flow and pen hugs
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Date: 12/6/2014 8:21:00 PM
I think i rarely saw carolers in my life. But it is such a neat custom and to imagine seeing them out there in the snow coming toward your house. Very lovely.
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Date: 12/6/2014 10:05:00 AM
A lovely Christmas snow poem, Dr. Ram. I remember, as a child, dripping icicles on the tongue. A contest winner for sure. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 12/6/2014 10:00:00 AM
A beautiful Christmas scene you have painted. Good luck in the contest Dr. Mehta.
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Date: 12/6/2014 6:42:00 AM
very beautifully penned Dr Mehta - good luck with the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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