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A Chook Inside

if you had a chook inside, it’s sure to make a mess, If you had a chook inside, never call it Ness, for if you call a chook that name, the mess would be double, a chook called Ness is terrible, cause it always makes trouble, if you have a chook inside, you ought to call it Vanessa, all chooks by that name, the mess they make is lessa.

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Date: 9/30/2023 7:06:00 PM
Fire Bird, Thanks to this poem's protagonist, curiosity's got the better of me. Now I desperately want a chook. -Richard
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Fire Bird
Date: 9/30/2023 7:13:00 PM
Hahaha, just don't have it inside! - Phoenix :)
Date: 9/28/2023 2:14:00 AM
Hmmm...I think I'll take your advice! ;]
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Fire Bird
Date: 9/28/2023 2:16:00 AM
Hahaha, I hope so, chooks inside cause disasters!! - Phoenix :)
Date: 9/27/2023 4:27:00 PM
glad you could post this poem! hilarious, informative and humourous. don't lose your spark, your poems are so special!
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Date: 9/27/2023 4:29:00 PM
Hi, Writing Muse, thank you for the encouraging poems, your comments and poems always fill me up with hope and happiness! - Phoenix :)

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