A Chook Inside

if you had a chook inside,
it’s sure to make a mess,
If you had a chook inside,
never call it Ness,
for if you call a chook that name,
the mess would be double,
a chook called Ness is terrible,
cause it always makes trouble,
if you have a chook inside,
you ought to call it Vanessa,
all chooks by that name,
the mess they make is lessa.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Theraven Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 7:06 PM
Fire Bird, Thanks to this poem's protagonist, curiosity's got the better of me. Now I desperately want a chook. -Richard
Bird Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 7:13 PM
Hahaha, just don't have it inside! - Phoenix :)
Bahr Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 2:14 AM
Hmmm...I think I'll take your advice! ;]
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September 28, 2023 at 2:16 AM
Hahaha, I hope so, chooks inside cause disasters!! - Phoenix :)
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