A Choice

Peace again rules My~Day~ Comforting.... in a pleasant light hearted way Nature draws me near Banishing all my fear Thank You Lord For giving me Light Holding me Dear through the Night It is a Choice that we make A Dream this Love must not forsake Take my hand and come with me There is nothing if you follow the dark Eventually you become the mark It is never to late to swallow your pride Humble is a lasting stride.....

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J Hamilton Gist

Date: 4/18/2017 8:48:00 PM

Puts me in he mood to pray.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/28/2017 8:46:00 PM

Love it, if you can't talk to him, who can you talk too. I've written a few about him. One is " A Lover's Quarrel".

Nicholas Windle

Date: 3/21/2017 9:22:00 AM

for its in reflective thought i read this you encapsulate so well our lives i think you portray our flaws so well. and yes we all need a guiding light what ever our faith like it very much thank you for putting perspective into our lives and a little faith in our souls god bless

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/21/2017 8:56:00 AM

Hi Ninette, beautifully written and more beautiful is your strong faith!

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/5/2015 3:28:00 PM

Great poem with a positive message :)

Tim Smith

Date: 1/4/2015 6:33:00 PM

Excellent...never to late to swallow your pride...hugs Tim

David Meade

Date: 1/4/2015 6:27:00 PM

Outstanding write -- love that last line -- A very hard one for me to keep stride, I always trip. Light, love and peace fill all your days dear friend. 7 fav