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A Chilly Embrace

By Michael J Falotico

                                                          a chilly breeze held..
                                                     in midst of a summer night..
                                                           a ghostly embrace..

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Tim B

July 20, 2011 at 10:31 PM

Very nice imagery, and convincing feeling too. I love any poetry relating to the cold, but this one is top notch sir :)

Dinda Minardi

July 4, 2011 at 8:06 AM

this is mysterious and sweet... Nice mix, Michael :)

Andrea Dietrich

July 3, 2011 at 11:24 PM

A vivid picture of the chill in the air one summer night, Michael. Is it for any contest? My therapy will begin this coming Friday, well, they will show me things to help me regain full movement again. It's stange to have to require therapy.It seems to me it will all come back naturally with "healing time" but I could be wrong. Thanks for your concern. I know Gert has twice my problems. I guess for him, it's both shoulders and nothing to be done for him at the moment. poor guy!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 3, 2011 at 2:45 PM

luv the mysterious tone and overtone of intrigue in this gentle yet haunting Haiku Michael.. brilliant parallels and analogies.. complete the flow..luv.. your Jersey Girl in haunting mode luv..and ..u are welcome...

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 3, 2011 at 11:24 AM

aww shucks-- and you just made me blush with that comment you left in my haiku ;) really liked the contrast you put in here, Michael :) hugs your way ;D