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"a Child's Cry"

The fight goes on an endless roar It tears me apart. Digs deep to the core In the fight these people don't see the saddening harm they are doing to me I love them, they seem not to care Where is the love? It is not there I feel so bare I wish they would stop their trivial fights that are converted to a mess and taken to flight I feel so empty. It seems so cold I must be brave and keep a strong hold For now I live in the love not seen hoping soon to understand what it all means I know some day there will be a solution but scars grow deep and my soul's of polution How long must I face a problem not mine? I'm hoping for a day when love is devine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/9/2010 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kimberly. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:26:00 PM
congrats on being featured this week, this piece is very deserving, painfully beautiful, powerful, and inspiring. keep holding on, even tunnels end in light. this was a great piece. welcome to soup. much love, madison.
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Date: 7/4/2010 2:34:00 AM
Wow intense. I can relate to this on so many levels it is sad. You have a gift. :) Love, Chrisssy
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Date: 7/3/2010 8:05:00 PM
you can put it down as a ryhme. I like this poem, it has deep feelings. You hooked me now you have to write more. Welcome to Soup.
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:19:00 PM
This was written when I was 16. I won't tell you how long ago that was :) Just learning this site. It's a great place for my work and to actually learn what style I write in. Any help with interpreting my style would be greatly appreciated.
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Date: 7/3/2010 3:52:00 PM
Welcfome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..on vacation..
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