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A Childs Christmas Hope

I hear the bells jingle, hoofs on the snow! when white clouds rumble, is Santa on tow? days are getting shorter but nights now grow, I wait to hear someone go ho! ho! ho!! Christams tree stands pretty by our fireside, carol singers breath heaven, it’s yule tide! candles on window, twinkling bulbs will guide, when Santa calls, hope our chimney is wide! early to bed we shall go, all tonight, dreaming of a tomorrow far more bright, snow will still be covering the world white, new gifts will be waiting to our delight! Premium contest winner(5) Christmas rhyme 8-12 lines only perfect rhyme only- checked on Rhyme zone written 19/12/2020 Tania Kitchin

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Date: 12/27/2020 11:42:00 AM
I love the innocence of the little ones when they still believe in Santa, many congrats on your placement:-) hugs Jan xx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/13/2021 6:48:00 AM
Thanks Jan!:)
Date: 12/27/2020 4:53:00 AM
Krish, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful Christmas poem!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/27/2020 6:37:00 AM
Tania I am honoured! Thank you! a great contest!
Date: 12/19/2020 5:33:00 PM
This will be the last year our granddaughter believes in Santa so it is a special Christmas. I enjoyed the wonderful imagery in your poem Krish. Mele Kalikimaka my friend! xxoo
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/20/2020 12:17:00 AM
Thanks Connie! Mele kalikimaka to you too! Hawaii must be a special place for Christmas and I hope your granddaughter has a swinging time!! Merry Christmas to you all!!
Date: 12/19/2020 4:53:00 PM
A child's hope is so nice and innocent. You have portrayed it well, Krish. G.L. in the contest. Peace on Earth, Gershon
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/20/2020 12:14:00 AM
Thanks Gershon and a Merry Christmas to you! Those little memories and dreams live on through our children!

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