Krish Radhakrishna Poet Rhyme

A Childs Christmas Hope

I hear the bells jingle, hoofs on the snow!
when white clouds rumble, is Santa on tow?
days are getting shorter but nights now grow,
I wait to hear someone go ho! ho! ho!!

Christams tree stands pretty by our fireside,
carol singers breath heaven, it’s yule tide!
candles on window, twinkling bulbs will guide,
when Santa calls, hope our chimney is wide!

early to bed we shall go, all tonight,
dreaming of a tomorrow far more bright,
snow will still be covering the world white,
new gifts will be waiting to our delight!

Premium contest winner(5)
Christmas rhyme 8-12 lines only
perfect rhyme only- checked on Rhyme zone
written 19/12/2020
Tania Kitchin

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Jan Allison December 27, 2020 at 11:42 AM I love the innocence of the little ones when they still believe in Santa, many congrats on your placement:-) hugs Jan xx Krish Radhakrishna November 13, 2021 at 6:48 AM Thanks Jan!:)

Tania Kitchin December 27, 2020 at 4:53 AM Krish, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful Christmas poem! Krish Radhakrishna December 27, 2020 at 6:37 AM Tania I am honoured! Thank you! a great contest!

Connie Marcum Wong December 19, 2020 at 5:33 PM This will be the last year our granddaughter believes in Santa so it is a special Christmas. I enjoyed the wonderful imagery in your poem Krish. Mele Kalikimaka my friend! xxoo Krish Radhakrishna December 20, 2020 at 12:17 AM Thanks Connie! Mele kalikimaka to you too! Hawaii must be a special place for Christmas and I hope your granddaughter has a swinging time!! Merry Christmas to you all!!

Gershon Wolf December 19, 2020 at 4:53 PM A child's hope is so nice and innocent. You have portrayed it well, Krish. G.L. in the contest. Peace on Earth, Gershon Krish Radhakrishna December 20, 2020 at 12:14 AM Thanks Gershon and a Merry Christmas to you! Those little memories and dreams live on through our children!