A Child Outside

I sit and watch a child outside my window An air of innocence is on display Life is new to him, he has not felt yet Things within his mind that cause dismay The jubilance of youth is overwhelming Everything he sees he must explore Adventure lurks around each hidden corner Nothing is too little to ignore Expressions on his face greet each new treasure Validated by his youthful smile Then off again to solve another mystery His attention held by each but a short while It seems that as I watch, the child grows older The magic of his world begins to wane Reality becomes his new companion His boyish flights will not return again I sit and watch a child outside my window But I am not sure that is what I see I think that what I view is a reflection The memories of the child that once was me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/6/2012 12:31:00 PM
Bob when I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/29/2012 5:15:00 PM
Terrific write, enjoyed it very much. Congrats on your win!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 4/30/2012 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Cecilia
Date: 4/24/2012 2:11:00 PM
Ahh growing old, yet, we have little recourse ;) NICE write! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Bob Quigley
Date: 4/24/2012 2:13:00 PM
No choice at all actually. Thanks for the kudos
Date: 4/23/2012 8:23:00 AM
Very good job telling a story that is easy to read, yet poignant. Congratulations.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 4/24/2012 2:12:00 PM
Thank you Joann
Date: 4/23/2012 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "A Childhood Memory" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 4/23/2012 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Carol
Date: 12/25/2011 12:28:00 PM
sorry not for a contest... jesus in a box... judged already...
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/25/2011 2:18:00 PM
Best wishes for a happy and prosperous New Year to you also. Thanks for stopping by DP
Date: 12/25/2011 12:23:00 PM
Bob , Now that the presents are wrapped, the stockings all hung, all that's left now is the holiday fun! Merry Christmas! (Dr Seuss) , wishing you the best this coming year.. i'm gonna enjoy all the blessings this coming year...GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST,.. bless you always,..p.d
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Date: 12/22/2011 10:43:00 PM
wow, that last stanza. What a great final stanza to this nostalgic gem, Bob. Much enjoyed.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/23/2011 8:02:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 12/21/2011 8:19:00 PM
Exquisite! The story is filled with magic and the last line really touched me. A precious verse so well written! :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/21/2011 10:20:00 PM
Thank you Elizabeth. Very kind
Date: 12/21/2011 6:35:00 AM
top class write my friend. excellent poetry.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/21/2011 8:23:00 AM
Thank yo Steven. Much appreciated
Date: 12/20/2011 11:00:00 AM
Is this a form of imagism? It is deeply reflective and completely displays the imaginative childlike mind you have, Bob! Enjoyed this a lot. Merry Christmas, Gwendolen
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/20/2011 11:11:00 AM
Yup Gwen. My wife would agree with you. She often asks me when I am going to grow up:)
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