A Child Outside

I sit and watch a child outside my window An air of innocence is on display Life is new to him, he has not felt yet Things within his mind that cause dismay The jubilance of youth is overwhelming Everything he sees he must explore Adventure lurks around each hidden corner Nothing is too little to ignore Expressions on his face greet each new treasure Validated by his youthful smile Then off again to solve another mystery His attention held by each but a short while It seems that as I watch, the child grows older The magic of his world begins to wane Reality becomes his new companion His boyish flights will not return again I sit and watch a child outside my window But I am not sure that is what I see I think that what I view is a reflection The memories of the child that once was me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 12:31 PM
Bob when I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
Macfarlane Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 5:15 PM
Terrific write, enjoyed it very much. Congrats on your win!
Quigley Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 8:45 AM
Thank you Cecilia
Guzzi Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 2:11 PM
Ahh growing old, yet, we have little recourse ;) NICE write! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Quigley Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 2:13 PM
No choice at all actually. Thanks for the kudos
Grisetti Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 8:23 AM
Very good job telling a story that is easy to read, yet poignant. Congratulations.
Quigley Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 2:12 PM
Thank you Joann
Brown Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 6:15 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "A Childhood Memory" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 8:18 AM
Thank you Carol
A   Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 12:28 PM
sorry not for a contest... jesus in a box... judged already...
Quigley Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 2:18 PM
Best wishes for a happy and prosperous New Year to you also. Thanks for stopping by DP
A   Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 12:23 PM
Bob , Now that the presents are wrapped, the stockings all hung, all that's left now is the holiday fun! Merry Christmas! (Dr Seuss) , wishing you the best this coming year.. i'm gonna enjoy all the blessings this coming year...GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST,.. bless you always,..p.d
Dietrich Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 10:43 PM
wow, that last stanza. What a great final stanza to this nostalgic gem, Bob. Much enjoyed.
Quigley Avatar
December 23, 2011 at 8:02 AM
Thank you Andrea
Wesley Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 8:19 PM
Exquisite! The story is filled with magic and the last line really touched me. A precious verse so well written! :)
Quigley Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 10:20 PM
Thank you Elizabeth. Very kind
Cooke Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 6:35 AM
top class write my friend. excellent poetry.
Quigley Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 8:23 AM
Thank yo Steven. Much appreciated
Song Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 11:00 AM
Is this a form of imagism? It is deeply reflective and completely displays the imaginative childlike mind you have, Bob! Enjoyed this a lot. Merry Christmas, Gwendolen
Quigley Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 11:11 AM
Yup Gwen. My wife would agree with you. She often asks me when I am going to grow up:)
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