A Child

Aye to a future Borne with infinite promise Untouched of first mourn

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/19/2016 9:39:00 AM

I do so Love Haiku Mark and i do so Love to read many different types, be they traditional or not. I think it is the style of putting forward the complete vision in so few lines and words. This marks all the boxes for me Mark. This Haiku goes into my faves and a definite seven for the content. The vision is clear....Vladislav.

Mark Woods
Date: 1/19/2016 9:22:00 PM

I enjoy having a wee word play occasionally. I'm actually absolutely rapt that you have picked up on this. I normally would delete a poem that no has commented on but I personally liked this because of the dual meanings. Thank you : )