The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide

A Cherry and the Cream

Like A Cherry and The Cream,
You and Me set to be.
The Candied holded
the syrup for so many. 
And your smoothness 
Was an attraction for even more. 
Despite being two versatile integrants, 
Our sugar added to become sour.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Agustin Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 7:08 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Chaudhary Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 6:17 AM
This one is so beautiful. I liked this line:-"Our sugar added to become sour. " Really great expression.. Keep on writing..... :)
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