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A Cherry and the Cream

Like A Cherry and The Cream, You and Me set to be. The Candied holded the syrup for so many. And your smoothness Was an attraction for even more. Despite being two versatile integrants, Our sugar added to become sour.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/25/2024 7:08:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Harshita Chaudhary

Date: 4/19/2020 6:17:00 AM

This one is so beautiful. I liked this line:-"Our sugar added to become sour. " Really great expression.. Keep on writing..... :)