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Getting sick from food poisoning is not so cool

                                 Yucky


April 8, 2020

Let the Pens Flow - Antonym Poetry Contest
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Lamoureux Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 6:41 AM
Yucky indeed. ;0)
One Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 4:23 PM
Hey... You've not written in so long . Hope you post again soon..
Rodrigues Avatar
April 23, 2020 at 7:03 AM
Yucky for sure but your poem is great!
Canerdy Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 7:51 PM
Cecelia, this is EXCELLENT! Janice
Macfarlane Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 7:57 PM
Thanks Janice. Hugs
Breidenthal Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 2:53 PM
I like this silly and clever poem about the sickening feeling of food poisoning. I have had experiences with that before...
Macfarlane Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 7:56 PM
Thanks J.W. Hopefully we both never get food poisoning again. Hugs
Breidenthal Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 2:54 PM
Overall, very good poetry! I like the contrast between a good experience with food and a bad one.
Proxenos Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 2:15 PM
Very clever write, and I know the feeling - got food poisoning by the coast last year in one of the best restaurants in Umhlanga with Oysters - in agony with pain and continual nausea! Blessings, Jennifer.
Macfarlane Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 7:55 PM
Thanks Jennifer. Yes, I had shellfish food poisoning, it's so awful. Hugs
Bangalee Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 12:52 AM
nice... lovely penning
Macfarlane Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 12:09 PM
Thank you Mahtab. Hugs
One Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 3:43 PM
Ha... Good one!
Macfarlane Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Thank you S.O. Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 4:41 PM
this was a really cute way to do the challenge!
Macfarlane Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Thank you Andrea. Hugs
May Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 8:51 AM
Food can bring both delight and fright, Nicely done Cecilia..
Macfarlane Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 10:33 AM
Yes, food poisoning is something I wouldn't want to experience again. Thank you Joseph. Hugs
Pandit Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 6:48 AM
A poem we can all relate to--apt for the theme--wonderfully executed, Cecilia. All the best.
Macfarlane Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 10:30 AM
I had food poisoning from shellfish once, so horrible. Thank you Vijay. Hugs
Godwin Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 6:07 PM
Even the yucky in your poem was lovely as it fit so perfectly. Yours is the first I've seen other than my hand scrawled one and I'm glad to see you formatted your poem just as I thought I would. I enjoyed your creative antonym expression! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Macfarlane Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 6:51 PM
Happy you enjoyed reading. Thank you CayCay. Hugs
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