A Cheeky Little Ode To You, My Love

My love you are far
Much hotter than stars,
Your beauty brings light to my 
life.
I really can't wait
For that wonderous date
When you finally become my 
wife.

My mind has been blown
By the love that you've shown,
If only I'd known from the 
start.
It's always been you,
But I never knew
That your feelings matched 
those of my heart.

Now I think I need 
to follow your lead 
and head back to bed for a 
while. 
When we both wake up next 
we can send loads of texts 
'bout our dreams that dissolve 
all those miles.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 2:12 PM
Sweeeet Simon, like it alot. - oxox hugs form Norway
Clarke Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 9:46 AM
Enjoyed this :) Very fluid
Cornwall Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 7:05 AM
Nice poem........Patrick
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