A Charmed Life

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At five years old, starting out in kindergarten I went to school with my favorite best friends Girls and boys I’d known as my local hearten The ones I loved so I had no need for amends We lived on a farm that was above the school And my grandfather often drove me there, too It was there that I learned to follow each rule Where I simply knew the good ways that I grew It just so happened, that our family had to move So into town I went where I found a new school At this new school I found very few to approve The kids there were all about being so very cruel After trying to know these new boys and girls I finally realized that I was much better off alone My past friendships had been such true pearls That this new place begin to feel like I was grown Somewhere amid the moving of my life to town I discovered that I had lost the child who had been She was alive inside, still wishing she wasn’t down But there weren’t any new friends she could win As the years passed by, my books got me through But when I finally did find friends again in high school They were wild and willful; the rebels were my crew With these rougher crowd I was so sure I was cool It would be years before I could finally look back And see that the move away from our old farm Led me to a loss that would haunt me with black A world that was filled with loneliness and harm When I see my old friends from those old days, long ago I remember them with a sweetness that fills me up They were the first relationships filled with love, although The years that came later would teach me to standup The moral of the story is that children feel the effects Of loss, moves, divorce and other grown up decisions If I could change it all, I don’t know what happens next But I do know that love would be kinder with provisions So if I could change one moment in my lifetime It would be the day I moved away from that farm Where I was so loved and known by that time That I was content with my life that was such a charm October 5, 2019 If only we could turn back the hands of time Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 10/15/2019 9:35:00 PM
The locus of interest in reading that you created in the begining does last till the end ... Naturally, reading your poem is a delight ... Congratulations on your podium win, Regina ...
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Date: 10/15/2019 4:04:00 PM
Well done Regina. This brought back memories of my early years. Thank you
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Date: 10/15/2019 10:02:00 AM
My friend, congratulations on your placement with this meaningful, inspiring and exceptional beautiful poetic piece! A fine fav, a superbly crafted poem that brings back childhood memories to this old poet.
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Date: 10/15/2019 6:32:00 AM
Congrats Regina on your super win with this great poem.
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Date: 10/14/2019 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Gina :)
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Date: 10/14/2019 12:38:00 PM
i think many will be able to relate, only some places can feel like home.. great story telling.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/5/2019 8:45:00 PM
This is excellent. Very sad and well expressed. So sorry that you had to leave the farm. Yes, these things have such an impact on children. Well done :)
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/5/2019 10:53:00 PM
Yes, definitely. Thanks for reading and commenting. You're a blessing. Bless you always with much love, Gina
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