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A Change of Shade

The baby walking Near with flowers in its eyes A bloom for life's cares Hands luring the child While the heart hisses a kiss Swords from the fire rise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/6/2012 3:04:00 PM
wow, what a strong message in this set. BIG congrats on the win.
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:38:00 PM
David. , congratulations, with your senryu in Michael's "Smiles & Frown" contest.. God Bless~PD
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Date: 9/5/2012 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations David on the super win in Michael's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2012 2:00:00 PM
spine-tingling, david.... kudos to you for the win! .. huggs! :)
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Date: 9/3/2012 1:14:00 PM
David, congrats on this winner...chilling ending! gwendolen
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Date: 9/3/2012 9:41:00 AM
powerful images! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/3/2012 9:03:00 AM
congrats David on a stunning write and win luv ..
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Date: 9/3/2012 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations David, there seems to be a deeper message in this, well done xx
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Date: 9/3/2012 6:50:00 AM
Congrats David on your win !!!! Michael
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