A Change Is a Comin'

bee in the bonnet bad tempered flowers poisoned climate in the hive © Harry J Horsman 2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/16/2019 1:56:00 PM

hello Harry, yes that is is a change that has come forward. have a nice day my friend.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/30/2019 3:15:00 AM

i can read a lot into this harry xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/22/2019 5:51:00 PM

Lovely and creative, Harry. I have become very wary of changes...both bees and flowers are falling victims to human progress! Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/21/2019 2:33:00 PM

i like the intriguing end line, harry... greeat 'ku!..huggs

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/21/2019 8:00:00 AM

Glad you stuck to the 575 format. I really like good haiku. Thanks for your kind words!! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/20/2019 3:10:00 PM

Nature has its ways..nicely done, Harry.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/20/2019 12:41:00 PM

Nice hakiu Harry, I think our minds were on the same lines. Good luck. Tom

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/20/2019 12:33:00 PM

I would say Harry that this write is a win - a change is certainly in the offing! Hugs, Jennifer.