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A Change is a comin'

bee in the bonnet bad tempered flowers poisoned climate in the hive © Harry J Horsman 2019

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Date: 7/16/2019 1:56:00 PM
hello Harry, yes that is is a change that has come forward. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 6/30/2019 3:15:00 AM
i can read a lot into this harry xx
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Date: 6/22/2019 5:51:00 PM
Lovely and creative, Harry. I have become very wary of changes...both bees and flowers are falling victims to human progress! Regards // paul
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Date: 6/21/2019 2:33:00 PM
i like the intriguing end line, harry... greeat 'ku!..huggs
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Date: 6/21/2019 8:00:00 AM
Glad you stuck to the 575 format. I really like good haiku. Thanks for your kind words!! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/20/2019 3:10:00 PM
Nature has its ways..nicely done, Harry.
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Date: 6/20/2019 12:41:00 PM
Nice hakiu Harry, I think our minds were on the same lines. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 6/20/2019 12:33:00 PM
I would say Harry that this write is a win - a change is certainly in the offing! Hugs, Jennifer.
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