A Change In Story Line
A bit story telling involved
Listen, carefully
When I stand facing sea, I realize
The gust of wind
Is not just enough
For the blocked passage inside
Right; let me ask you one more time
“Are you with me”?
Listen, carefully
Sea, wind or even these coconut trees
These were there
Right from the beginning
Yet, here comes the twist in the story
To tell you the truth
I felt there should be somebody
From that day onward
A change in story line
Sea is storm
Wind is hurricane
And those helpless coconut trees
Just swaying in wind…
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