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A Chance of Hope

On a road traveled, over grown with time Now a foot path memory, of bittersweet pines The sign, with a smile, marks a turn, taken Leading down to a tree, where first love was forsaken A raging river of life, which flowed unbridled Reduced to a stream, narrowing and idle Where seeds of love, were sewn to the winds Now echos of lovers, reverberate within Hallowed ground for a heart, with unbearable wounds Once a cradle of love, now a visited tomb Like a miner for gold, panning sands of time With unstoppable tears, of melancholic brine As the sun breaks through, the glint of a shard Glitters in the light, like a twinkling star Suddenly as despondency, is relieved by hope Panning faster, more appear, thawing love with a jolt The stream rises and rushes, in response to the melt Flowers bloom, birds sing, as new warmth is felt Standing and smiling, pocketing the gold Returns to reality, and hopes love will grow an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

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Date: 7/25/2018 10:23:00 AM
Wonder what made you think of this and where had it been? Jim Horn
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Date: 2/4/2016 1:12:00 AM
The only thing more precious than love is the hope we have for it. My hope is that yours is never found to have been lost. A truly beautiful and meaningful write. A favorite for me, my friend.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/4/2016 6:06:00 AM
Thank you my dear, for stopping in and taking the time to read and comment. The pleasure is always mine.
Date: 2/3/2016 7:39:00 PM
I feel your heart in this poem!! Great work of art!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/3/2016 7:47:00 PM
Thank you, Sarita. It was a difficult write for me. I appreciate the flowers:)
Date: 2/3/2016 6:41:00 PM
A wonderful descriptive write of hope, Daniel a 7 :) Eve
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/3/2016 6:43:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. I appreciate your words of support and encouragement. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 2/3/2016 5:22:00 PM
you are a very accomplished writer Daniel I like this very much:-) hugs jan xx
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/3/2016 5:33:00 PM
Jan, I honestly do appreciate your words of support. I take them as treasure to be stored when things aren't going so well. Thank you.

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