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A Challenged Earth

The challenge inside me
Grows every day
Will I ever be free
Is there any escape
To dwell on past
To worry of futur
To never be last
To always push further
To take evey task
I sometimes wonder why
I often think to ask
Is this the answer to my life
At the end of it all
Did I face the right challenge
Did I make the right call
Did I take true advantage
I don't believe life
Meant for the questions
The tension and strife
Material obbsessions
We push for the things
We should Already have
Enough food and clothing
A bed and a bath
All along we're forforgetting
Exactly what we are
A force of humanity 
Flying around a star
With one purpose only
As underlying as it is
To die and not die lonely
I guess the challenge is to live.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Nutter Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 2:51 AM
Life is hard and for some much harder than others. The challenge is to live and to live well.
Tapley Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 10:51 PM
I know I have made mistakes in the past, but when I reflect on them, I understand at the time I thought it was the right decision. I think you nailed it at the end, the biggest challenge is to live. And live life your way and be yourself. I have spent far too much of mine pleasing others. I had to learn to enjoy myself. Excellent thought
Hickman Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 6:05 PM
a very worth while piece especially for around Earth Day,,and I too want to welcome you to the soup,,may your spirit and mind be inspiredall the best into the future and beyond,,,Blessings..Cecil
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April 26, 2010 at 6:31 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jasmine. If you would like to have more of your poetry read try to limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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