A Cautionary Nursery Rhyme

Solomon Grundy, Solomon Grundy, sniffer of glue, when offered, on Monday. The Tuesday was hash, a whopping great spliff; on Wednesday took coke, a generous sniff. For Thursday some crack, the dodgiest brand, and Friday’s dope needle was quite second-hand. When Saturday came, a massive OD; on Sunday it ended, this hedonist spree. In spite of the blurb you find on a packet, right up to the end, he thought he could hack it! ~
For Debra's 'Nursery Rhyme' Competition.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 3:12 PM
Cute one..Congrats on your win..Sara
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March 29, 2013 at 8:15 PM
Charles, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 4:44 PM
this is quite original and I really like yours, Clive!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 1:01 PM
Hi and congratulations on your win Charles xx
Collins Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 6:59 PM
Wow Charles, you've weaved this twisted nursery rhyme to the bitter end. It's where the drug road goes. jail, mindless, or dead. love, Kathy P.S. Your poem is also very well rhymed and metered. A pleasing to the ear.
Bauer Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 2:52 PM
very clever and well-rhymed! i enjoyed!
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