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A Cautionary Nursery Rhyme

Solomon Grundy, Solomon Grundy, sniffer of glue, when offered, on Monday. The Tuesday was hash, a whopping great spliff; on Wednesday took coke, a generous sniff. For Thursday some crack, the dodgiest brand, and Friday’s dope needle was quite second-hand. When Saturday came, a massive OD; on Sunday it ended, this hedonist spree. In spite of the blurb you find on a packet, right up to the end, he thought he could hack it! ~
For Debra's 'Nursery Rhyme' Competition.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/1/2013 3:12:00 PM
Cute one..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/29/2013 8:15:00 PM
Charles, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA
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Date: 3/29/2013 4:44:00 PM
this is quite original and I really like yours, Clive!!
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Date: 3/29/2013 1:01:00 PM
Hi and congratulations on your win Charles xx
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Date: 3/24/2013 6:59:00 PM
Wow Charles, you've weaved this twisted nursery rhyme to the bitter end. It's where the drug road goes. jail, mindless, or dead. love, Kathy P.S. Your poem is also very well rhymed and metered. A pleasing to the ear.
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Date: 3/18/2013 2:52:00 PM
very clever and well-rhymed! i enjoyed!
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