A catch

two Robins scurry stop and go across the lawn worm lunch in their beaks Heidi Sands 4/30/25 (C)opyright

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Joseph May

Date: 5/2/2025 6:43:00 PM

lovely haiku Heidi, so nice to see the birds in spring

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/3/2025 6:35:00 AM

Yes, it is so nice to see the birds Thank you :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/1/2025 3:45:00 PM

Hello Heidi, robins are beautiful bords. I often watch them searching for the worm. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/2/2025 10:15:00 AM

Hello Heidi, After the rainfall the robins come to eat the worms. They really have a feast. Hugs. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/1/2025 5:23:00 PM

Yes they are. I was watching them too. They must be catching a lot. They are big. Thank you for your visit and comment . Hugs :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/1/2025 8:58:00 AM

What a wonderful Haiku write. I love the pretty Robins. Glad you could give them lunch. Hahaha!!! Have a lovely day writing away..............

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/1/2025 10:32:00 AM

Hi Paula. There are many kinds of birds here. Gold finch and house finch come daily to the feeder. Blue Jay showed up today. Robin bounce around the yard daily. They found their own worms in the grass. I hope you have a nice time writing away too. Hugs :)