A Calm Enhanced Fog

a calm enhanced fog glowing through reflecting light no audible sound
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 1, 2012 at 5:08 AM
and so intriguing to watch too as reading your amazing descriptive lines Russell luv .. most enhancing imagery my friend .. so great to be back too ..
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November 30, 2012 at 3:06 PM
Hi Russell, Consider entering my Questionku contest. I think you would be well suited to the style.
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November 30, 2012 at 12:56 PM
Hi Russell, good write on this Haiku. Rollo
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November 30, 2012 at 12:28 PM
There has been some fog of late..I do enjoy sitting out on the porch and viewing the it..Great work..I can just see it enhanced by the light of a boat, truck, street lamp or moon...Thanks for stopping by..Oh! I looked for a picture of a Mockingbird in the rain but did not find one..Sara
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November 30, 2012 at 12:17 PM
Russell, thick fog... i dislike the image,, good haiku... pd
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November 30, 2012 at 11:41 AM
You did real good on the first two lines Russ [don't capitalize though ;)]..now think of a line 3 which isn't a re-telling of the first 2 lines?? when you saw this what else was there? any sounds? any scents? Light & Love
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