A Calm Enhanced Fog

a calm enhanced fog glowing through reflecting light no audible sound Russell Sivey

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/1/2012 5:08:00 AM

and so intriguing to watch too as reading your amazing descriptive lines Russell luv .. most enhancing imagery my friend .. so great to be back too ..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/30/2012 3:06:00 PM

Hi Russell, Consider entering my Questionku contest. I think you would be well suited to the style.

Rollo West

Date: 11/30/2012 12:56:00 PM

Hi Russell, good write on this Haiku. Rollo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/30/2012 12:28:00 PM

There has been some fog of late..I do enjoy sitting out on the porch and viewing the it..Great work..I can just see it enhanced by the light of a boat, truck, street lamp or moon...Thanks for stopping by..Oh! I looked for a picture of a Mockingbird in the rain but did not find one..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/30/2012 12:17:00 PM

Russell, thick fog... i dislike the image,, good haiku... pd

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/30/2012 11:41:00 AM

You did real good on the first two lines Russ [don't capitalize though ;)]..now think of a line 3 which isn't a re-telling of the first 2 lines?? when you saw this what else was there? any sounds? any scents? Light & Love