Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

A Butterfly's Freedom

The Tiger Swallowtail visits me every day
Kissing each flower, along its way
Fluttering through my yard, in a happy flight
Lifting my spirit with every sight
So delicate, in its freedom to fly
Creating its own dance, on air up high
I stop to watch, every time it passes by
Wishing to be just like the butterfly

Heidi Sands

6/19/20

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Panagiota Romios June 20, 2020 at 6:32 PM I think our souls are like butterflies.))) Hey Heidi..I sent you a Soupmail.please check it ASAP. Love butterflies~ wish there were more! Heidi Sands June 21, 2020 at 7:59 AM Thank you Panagiota. I appreciate your comment and soupmail. Have a nice day :)

Lindsay Laurie June 19, 2020 at 9:33 PM Hello Heidi … a butterfly gives us a feeling of how life can be so beautiful with daintiness and colour. Very nice and calming verse Heidi - thank you - Lindsay Heidi Sands June 20, 2020 at 7:35 AM Hi Lindsay. Yes, that's true. I appreciate your comment and you are welcome :)

Timothy Mcguire June 19, 2020 at 8:59 PM very nice poem Heidi, I enjoyed it! if you get a chance read my poem "Butterfly" Heidi Sands June 20, 2020 at 7:33 AM Hi Tmothy. Thank you. I am happy you enjoyed this. I will read your poem too :)

Arturo Michael June 19, 2020 at 7:56 PM Nice little rhyme...I love the flow you captured in flight... Heidi Sands June 20, 2020 at 7:32 AM Thank you Arturo. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit June 19, 2020 at 4:03 PM Enjoyed the moments you depicted, Heidi. Heidi Sands June 19, 2020 at 4:09 PM I am happy to hear you enjoyed this Vijay. I hope you are also enjoying today :)

Demetrios Trifiatis June 19, 2020 at 3:56 PM In my garden I loved to observe the flowers fly and always I tried to photograph them when they stop to sip some nectar from a bloom. Your poem is really so joyful as a butterfly's flight my dearest friend, Heidi. Hugs xxx Heidi Sands June 19, 2020 at 4:01 PM Thank you Demetrios. I have a few nice photographs of them close up, that I took a while ago. I am happy you found this to be joyful. I hope all is well. Hugs :)

Tom Cunningham June 19, 2020 at 3:44 PM I love to see them in the garden in summertime, our weather hopefully will pick up next week. Enjoy your weekend Tom Heidi Sands June 19, 2020 at 3:59 PM I do hope the weather will change in a good way for you Tom, so that you can also see them in your garden. Thank you for your visit and comment :)

Jan Allison June 19, 2020 at 2:57 PM what a charming poem Heidi - I too would love to be a butterfly i know I am rising high in confidence with my poetry:-) hugs Jan xx Heidi Sands June 19, 2020 at 3:19 PM Thank you so much Jan. Very nice :)