Line Gauthier Poet Rhyme

A Burning Heart

As a summer breeze words from your lips are sweeter than honey
In the sanctity of the night with the moon hovering above
Inspired by reverence for unearthliness and spirituality
A profound predilection for pious thought and brotherly love
Has the heart burning with condemnation of apathy and brutality
While encompassed with pulsating altruistic feelings
And a deep consternation for retribution meanings
When inwardly balancing morality and mortality



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on October 31, 2018 for contest 7 LINES, 7 WORDS: RHYME POETRY sponsored by LU LOO  -  RANKED 4TH

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Timothy Mcguire December 4, 2018 at 7:36 PM Deep, soul stirring and wonderful Line Gauthier December 4, 2018 at 8:16 PM Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.

Purbasha Roy November 30, 2018 at 1:51 AM Congratulations on your fine win! Line Gauthier November 30, 2018 at 9:10 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Purbasha.

Gregory Richard Barden November 28, 2018 at 1:09 AM Big congrats on your win in Lu Loo's contest, Line - keep writing, my friend! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :-) Line Gauthier November 28, 2018 at 9:15 AM Thanks, Gregory. Much appreciated.

Eve Roper November 27, 2018 at 1:20 PM Congratulation on your win, Line :) Line Gauthier November 28, 2018 at 9:15 AM Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Mystic Rose Rose November 27, 2018 at 12:26 PM Very well done Line, congrats on your win . Line Gauthier November 28, 2018 at 9:14 AM Thank you, Pixie.

Beautiful Scars November 27, 2018 at 7:31 AM Amazing poem sweet Line! I loved every word and great rhythm and rhyme too. Thank you and congratulations on your placement. Hugs...:)-luloo Line Gauthier November 28, 2018 at 9:14 AM Thank you so much, Lu Loo. Most appreciated. It was a fun contest.

CayCay Godwin November 1, 2018 at 5:47 AM I relate to this and for the most part I echo each sentiment. I think you touched head on a subject needing that touch and did so quite well. I really enjoyed your poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Line Gauthier November 1, 2018 at 8:30 AM Thank you so much for your lovely visit and much appreciated comment, CayCay.