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A Bunch of Words

A poem is just a bunch of words Unless somebody reads it And, like a plant, will droop and fade If there's no one to feed it. It doesn't need a lot of care To help with its survival, Just someone to acknowledge it And welcome its arrival. A quick perusal will suffice Though surely there's no onus, But if more readers get on board, Of course, that is a bonus. The poet writes because she must And plants her words, not knowing If they will wither on the vine Or maybe keep on growing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/24/2019 4:27:00 AM
What I admire (even envy) most about your writing, Ilene, is your gift for saying the profound with simple language! I strive for same but it's a struggle to get the results. / M
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Date: 8/23/2019 5:59:00 PM
See ilene, this is what the public deserves. You should be read beyond this little group of admirers here on soup. Pure gold. <3 :)
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Date: 8/22/2019 7:39:00 PM
I can only echo John Lawless' wonderful comment below. You really nailed this one! :) gw
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Date: 8/22/2019 3:16:00 PM
OH, Irene, put a ribbon on this one and water it every day....nicely done...love the final stanza
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Date: 8/22/2019 2:13:00 PM
Great message, Ilene! I really enjoy your poetry. Blessings, Kim
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Date: 8/22/2019 1:28:00 PM
Indeed, yes....how many poetic gems, I wonder, have "withered on the vine" and disappeared for lack of a reader and how many poets/writers of eternal songs have disappeared because they had no audience? This is an appropriate and timely observation that deserves its own readership/recognition....Good job! (And artfully stated, as always!)
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Date: 8/22/2019 11:39:00 AM
What a wonderful thought Ilene, a poem we can all relate to, am adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/22/2019 11:12:00 AM
I say let's keep this one growing. Loved this Ilene.
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