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A Bunch of Haiku Nouns

Rice walls slide secrets Hand paint intellectual lips Tear Kimono wings

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/12/2010 12:28:00 PM

Interesting Haiku that you have penned ....I can see that Chinese wall with the painting and the Kimono....Keep the creative pen flowing... Sara

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/7/2010 8:29:00 PM

Enjoyed yur SM...Feel free to Sm me anytime, big hugs, Jimmy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/3/2010 5:00:00 PM

Really the original haiku.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/3/2010 3:47:00 PM

Nice .. and I remember Brian had a contest with all Haiku nouns.. a while ago.. I think this is the Japanese way to write Haiku and its not as easy as u make it look or read my friend.. with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/3/2010 12:29:00 PM

Original..I love this Haiku Nouns..:) Charma

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/3/2010 7:58:00 AM

Very clever, Iolanda!! Took some thinking to do this!! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/3/2010 3:20:00 AM

sounds like the longest wall ever built, a nice way to describe pain, and death, i think,..p.d.