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A Bunch of Haiku Nouns

Rice walls slide secrets
Hand paint intellectual lips
Tear Kimono wings

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Sara Kendrick

May 12, 2010 at 12:28 PM

Interesting Haiku that you have penned ....I can see that Chinese wall with the painting and the Kimono....Keep the creative pen flowing... Sara

Jimmy Anderson

May 7, 2010 at 8:29 PM

Enjoyed yur SM...Feel free to Sm me anytime, big hugs, Jimmy

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 3, 2010 at 5:00 PM

Really the original haiku.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 3, 2010 at 3:47 PM

Nice .. and I remember Brian had a contest with all Haiku nouns.. a while ago.. I think this is the Japanese way to write Haiku and its not as easy as u make it look or read my friend.. with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"