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Woke up in the night with a cold or allergy..Feeling awful..Sara

A Bug

Upper respiratory bug
Appeared suddenly in my lungs
Moving slowly like slug
Now its hard to breath no songs sungs
Tomorrow will be clouds among
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 1/16/2012 2:09:00 PM
Clever write, my friend - hope you're feeling better today
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Date: 1/14/2012 2:31:00 PM
I pray God for your soon relief of your lungs problem and pray for your good health, my friend, bl
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Date: 1/14/2012 2:43:00 AM
olala, that is not good. hope you're feeling better Sara.
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Date: 1/13/2012 8:41:00 PM
Hope you feel better soon, Sara. God Bless. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/13/2012 5:23:00 PM
Hi Sara I picked up a 24 hour bug recently also found it hard to breath not looking forward to the clouds at all but each day I grow older I cant help but know they are up there. Just have to pray for the sun to burn them away or turns them to rain. Cheers
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