A Bug

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Woke up in the night with a cold or allergy..Feeling awful..Sara

Upper respiratory bug Appeared suddenly in my lungs Moving slowly like slug Now its hard to breath no songs sungs Tomorrow will be clouds among

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Jack Horne

Date: 1/16/2012 2:09:00 PM

Clever write, my friend - hope you're feeling better today

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/14/2012 2:31:00 PM

I pray God for your soon relief of your lungs problem and pray for your good health, my friend, bl

M.I.A .

Date: 1/14/2012 2:43:00 AM

olala, that is not good. hope you're feeling better Sara.

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/13/2012 8:41:00 PM

Hope you feel better soon, Sara. God Bless. Love, Kim

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 1/13/2012 5:23:00 PM

Hi Sara I picked up a 24 hour bug recently also found it hard to breath not looking forward to the clouds at all but each day I grow older I cant help but know they are up there. Just have to pray for the sun to burn them away or turns them to rain. Cheers