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Woke up in the night with a cold or allergy..Feeling awful..Sara

A Bug

Upper respiratory bug
Appeared suddenly in my lungs
Moving slowly like slug
Now its hard to breath no songs sungs
Tomorrow will be clouds among
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horne Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 2:09 PM
Clever write, my friend - hope you're feeling better today
Devnath  Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 2:31 PM
I pray God for your soon relief of your lungs problem and pray for your good health, my friend, bl
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January 14, 2012 at 2:43 AM
olala, that is not good. hope you're feeling better Sara.
Merryman Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Hope you feel better soon, Sara. God Bless. Love, Kim
Flaherty Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 5:23 PM
Hi Sara I picked up a 24 hour bug recently also found it hard to breath not looking forward to the clouds at all but each day I grow older I cant help but know they are up there. Just have to pray for the sun to burn them away or turns them to rain. Cheers
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