A Broken Trust

What have I uttered!?
Where do I stand?!
What Am I now?! 
A day has begun
A role is to be played
The bells shall ring
A dove with a wounded wing
A Satan in an angels attire
The heart shall weep
A sinister image shall creep 
A trust shall break
A friend! A vermin !
A friend un masked
A fiend! A swindler 
The cloud is clear
The lies are translucent
A drop of tear
A swear! A curse! to the heavens
Two figures walk away
And Alas! Farewell.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fulghum Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 8:34 PM
Very Nice Mary, I love the descriptive quality of this poem. Thank you for the comment on my poem "The Bond". Thanks for sharing yours. Doug
Moussa Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 2:09 PM
It is after all this pain and agony that an epiphany strikes,that at the end of the day oneself is ones only best friend .I hope in time all our wounds might heal.
A   Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 2:01 PM
A broken one indeed. Rachel,!No. one should have to stick around once trust is broken.. living a life with one who broke trust can be depressing everyday.. I should know. I'm still here and not walked away.. Take care,..p.d.
Mist Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 1:58 PM
i have had problems with trust..i have been betrayed the worse ways you can imagine..believe me..lied about and all sorts of things..completely and totally betrayed without anyone solving a single thing to correct it or to heal me
Mist Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 1:57 PM
I know what this feels like personally...you get lied too..then discoveries lead you to find out other things..you feel special and unique and then WAM..the truth is shown to you in a variety of ways..
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