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A Broken Soul

Sadness, anger Feelings that I hate But now I see it’s late I see there’s no way back Because strength is what I lack My soul…it screams, it aches It fights and it breaks It breaks into millions of pieces If I could I would have fixed this I sit under the dark sky Only one word I whisper “Why?” The voice of nature echoes it… I feel the darkness The silence Rise among my eyes And suddenly I realize I’m in a pit of lies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 4/16/2014 9:00:00 AM
Lame old lies. Too late to save the world I suppose
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Date: 7/13/2013 6:48:00 PM
Val, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, deep with distance.. I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 7/13/2013 6:40:00 AM
-Hi, Val. - A good written poem. - Like it a lot. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/13/2013 4:34:00 AM
Well written thought provoking and deep poem. Welcome tot P/Soup.
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Date: 7/12/2013 11:11:00 PM
A very deep poem Val-Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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