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A Broken Poem Heard

All my words seem intact... A four sided poem of glass that will distract... On each angle it seems strong and right... But on the shelf it sits with no light... Then it slips as it struggles to be seen... And crashes to the floor where it cant' lean... Broken pieces scattered on the ground... A broken poem that just made a sound...

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Red Fiery

Date: 1/1/2012 9:59:00 AM

this is another marvellous wrk Michaell...hope ur poems always rise and shine....cheers !!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2011 6:28:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing Michael. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

Dan Kearley

Date: 12/5/2011 5:05:00 PM

Yes! Imagination as it crashes...Loved it!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 12/4/2011 8:48:00 AM

A broken poem that just made a sound, what a line, Michael. I like how you package it in that fancy form :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/28/2011 7:46:00 PM

Hello Michael,, how are you? Me just here to join a contest...lol.. i can't wait for you to impress me with a contest.. i was kidding about them being boring...i was just mad cause they are all out of my league.. and what is my league you ask??? lol.... my craziness and bluntness.... about your poem: it is very sounding.. i could imagine the depth that spoke that moment... enjoyed,..p.d.

M.I.A .

Date: 11/28/2011 7:35:00 PM

shattering indeed! i loved the slow motion layers when you pealed this piece Michael.

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 11/28/2011 2:38:00 PM

Very clever very visual and what a sound it makes! X Lizzie

George Aul

Date: 11/28/2011 9:05:00 AM

A great picture of words.........George

Tracy Edwards

Date: 11/28/2011 7:50:00 AM

Oh that is so sad..it brought tears to my eyes. xx

Jay Porknbean

Date: 11/27/2011 6:54:00 PM

Wow. that is a GOOD one. poetry at it's best

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/27/2011 2:39:00 PM

Very expressive indeed...I don't think your poem will lean and crash..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting...Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/27/2011 12:50:00 PM

Hallo from Norway. Thank you for comments on my first poems on this PoertySoup. I am not so good in english - sorry! Anne-Lise

Tony Lane

Date: 11/27/2011 10:17:00 AM

And all the king's horses....

James Peranteau

Date: 11/27/2011 7:39:00 AM

Awesome write dear poet ! Just a weee note Michael; you could actually change the poem form to....'Shape' And this really is worded so perfectly, it brings the shape out of the glass ! Awesome ! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james

Debra Squyres

Date: 11/27/2011 7:39:00 AM

Wow..enjoyed reading this. Never thought of a poem as broken...but this really works. Great imagination...

Cory Long

Date: 11/27/2011 7:32:00 AM

well penned love where you brought this.. A broken poem great touch. cory

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 11/27/2011 7:37:00 AM

Thanks Cory... just having fun this morning...